Showing posts with label short stories. Show all posts
Showing posts with label short stories. Show all posts

Tuesday, April 13, 2021

Reading Around the World (5)

This is my fifth post about my project to read a novel by a woman from every country. This week it's Morocco. I'm learning a lot about how non-English and non-European writers conceive of the novel form and purpose. The language of composition undoubtedly plays a role.

Year of the Elephant: A Moroccan Woman’s Journey toward Independence, and Other Stories, by Leila Abouzeid

 

Translation from the Arabic by Barbara Parmenter

Introduction by Elizabeth Warnock Fernea

University of Texas at Austin, Austin, Texas, 1989

 

In the tightly constructed novel of the title, Zahra returns to her home village after a sudden divorce. This is 1950s Morocco just after Independence. Her husband informs her she will receive whatever the law allows, which is one hundred days of support. After the years of fighting shoulder to shoulder with her husband and others for independence from France, the woman is stunned and angry, feeling betrayed and lost. Childless, she can return to live with a sibling but chooses instead to live in the room of the family estate she inherited from her father. The various rooms inherited by relatives have turned the old estate into an apartment building, but at least she has a place to live. A holy man in the local mosque listens and advises her as she recalls her years in the resistance, her many visits home bedecked in jewels and fine clothing, and her plans for a new life once the colonial power was driven from the land. She is unprepared for life as a divorced woman—no money, no skills, no family connections that she wants to submit to. A few friends attempt to aid her but there is little they can do and she wants her own life of dignity and position. She navigates this new world, assessing the changes in her old collaborators as well as her husband, but in the end she makes peace with the new nation of Morocco and her new self, and grows well beyond the woman her husband divorced.

 

Also included are eight short stories that are glimpses of life in Morocco as it struggles to transform itself from a traditional culture ruled as a French colony into a modern nation on the world stage. In most cases they read more like scenarios than fully developed stories but the view of a traditional culture clashing with the modern world is clear.

 

This is the first novel by a Moroccan woman written in Arabic and translated into English. As such it marks two important trends—the growing use of Arabic instead of French or English in literature and the rise of educated women in public and literary life. Although some reviewers have enjoyed the writing style, I didn’t find it admirable. The novella moves along well, and the ending is both ironic and hopeful.

 

 

Tuesday, March 16, 2021

Getting Organized: A Lesson in Keeping Track

Image by Hatice EROL from Pixabay

I recently made a mistake that at the beginning of my           writing life would have made me cringe and want to   crawl under the desk, but by this time I just kicked myself once and set about making sure it didn’t happen again. What was the error? I lost track of the final version of a short story, and submitted an earlier draft to a publication that has published everything I’ve sent it so far. It was rejected, of course.

 

My decision last year to increase the number of short stories I wrote and submitted meant more work floating around on my desk top and in my files, so I needed a better tracking system. I could no longer rely on the lists on paper I kept in a three-ring binder. I set up my spreadsheet and listed title, magazine/publisher, date submitted, date responded, response, notes. Sometimes a story is accepted by the first editor who reads it, and some titles end up going to a number of magazines before finding a home. The spreadsheet gave me a clear overview of where my work was. Apparently I was not as tidy with the stories themselves, and that’s where the trouble came in.

 

After the story was rejected I went looking for the final version I thought I had submitted. I easily found what I had submitted—it was right where it was supposed to be. But it did not read like the final version, which I remembered clearly because of the research it involved for a very neat ending (at least I thought it was near). I found and reviewed the research, but no matter how many times I searched, the only version that came up was the early rejected draft—in several places.

 

Several writers I know talk about pulling out work from years earlier and reworking the material into something new. To me the old stuff is just clutter but it still sits on my computer. After the mix-up with the story in question I’ve decided to clean out the old stuff and keep only the one version of material I’m working on. The danger of once again losing the one version that matters amid all the clutter and finding only the rejects is enough to decide me.

 

When the personal computer first became available and many writers were skeptical (many of us were still in love with our typewriters), The Writer carried an article about a novelist who argued in favor of the advantages of the new technology. He talked about how easy it was for him to compose two versions of the same scene. I remember vividly the photograph of him sitting at his desk holding up one version in his left hand and another in his right while he considered which was best for his work. That image haunted me because to me it meant he had two different novels, not two choices within one novel.

 

I may be a party of one in this matter, but I know that I rarely return to an earlier version. And in fact I can’t think of one instance in which I did, and then chose it over the more recent one. By now (a few weeks after the fact) I’m mostly philosophical about the incident. With the increase in my productivity in the last year it was probably inevitable that I would make such a mistake. I just wish it hadn’t been this one. And it won’t happen again. 

Thursday, January 28, 2021

Three Hours a Day

A successful short story writer once explained that she wrote a new short story every morning and edited a draft of an older story in the afternoon. This sounded like an admirably disciplined approach, and I’ve remembered this part of her talk for almost forty years. Recently an agent talked about his strategy for getting his clients to a six-figure salary. His advice was simple: writers should write three hours a day and work on marketing three hours a day. Like many of the other writers on the zoom program, I wondered if this was sustainable.

 

When I begin a new novel, I set a word quota for the day and usually reach it. My basic goal is 1,500 words, but the day’s results may range from 800 to 2500 words. For this year’s NaNoWriMo I logged in 48k words over the month (and after taking off most weekends). But I did not always write for three hours. I compose by scene, any one of which can be long or short but always moves me forward as I want, allowing for surprises, digressions, corrections and additions to earlier scenes. But the question of time doesn’t arise.

 

With the idea of time nagging at me, I decided to try a week of writing for three hours each morning. Because of other commitments, I couldn’t commit to three hours of marketing in the afternoon, and will set that aside for another time. (Any excuse will do to get out of three hours of marketing.)

 

I began my three-hour commitment on Monday morning. How am I doing? So far I’m four for four—four short stories written over four mornings, spending three hours each morning doing nothing but writing fiction. 

 

What have I learned? The time pressure changed my process. Sunday evening I began wondering what I’d write the next day since I’m not working on a novel (that would have been easy). In a file of short story ideas I found one that had been rattling around in my head without any sense of urgency. But once I knew I’d be writing soon the story began to feel warm, taking shape. At ten in the morning I was on my way, and at one o’clock, I was done, with a three-thousand word story. I set it aside to marinade, as it were, for revising at a later date. 

 

On Monday evening I once again wondered what I would write in the morning. Would my discipline dry up? I had a vague idea and held onto that through the evening. In the morning I went to work and after three hours had another three-thousand word story by one o’clock. Wednesday and today, Thursday, went the same with an idea in the previous evening and a three-hour sprint in the morning. Today my story is only twenty-five hundred words so I’m writing this blog to fill out the time.

 

The difference between this challenge and my regular approach to short stories is time. I don’t usually put myself under pressure to develop a story on a certain day at a certain hour. I prefer to take the time to think about it, let it take shape, and write it when I feel ready. The challenge has made me much more prolific, at least as far as short fiction is concerned, and I now have four stories to polish and send out. By tomorrow lunchtime I may have a fifth. I haven’t yet decided if I’m going to try for a second week. I’ll let you know. 

 

 

Wednesday, July 15, 2020

Around the World in the Company of Women

A few weeks ago, before the pandemic arrived and life had its predictable and even comfortable rhythms, I began a project I’d been thinking about for more than two years—reading a work of fiction written by a woman from every country. That’s 197 books (plus Palestine). I’m not sure I can name even half of the nations now existing, but I recently learned that Massachusetts has welcomed new citizens from almost everyone. As isolated as we may feel right now, during the pandemic, this statistic reminds me of how linked we are to the rest of the world.

My list is limited to fiction, which means novels, short stories, and drama. I doubt I’ll be reading much in the last category but I’m leaving it open just in case something extraordinary comes along.

Once I began to think about the number of books I was going to read, I realized I had to set some parameters. The work has to be written by a woman of the country. This means the author should be someone living primarily in her native or adopted country; I’m not interested in a book about life in Algeria written by someone who has lived most of her life in the United States or Europe. The novel is fertile territory for cross-pollination, but living in a country brings a different perspective that can be gained in no other way. Discovering life lived on the inside through fiction was one of my goals.
                              
Again, the book could be written in any language including English, but since I can only read my native tongue with any fluency, the fiction would have to be available in English. This meant I could be reading a lot of works in translation, and appreciating the quality of a translation was probably going to be one of the side benefits of this.

The books could date from any era, though I suspected most would have been written and published in the last fifty years or so. In the last few decades, even before eBooks, POD books, and self-publishing came to play a near-dominant role, traditional publishing broadened the titles on the shelf to include more work by women, and definitely more work by non-white women. I looked forward to lots of choices, discovering new writers, but I also knew some of the best titles might be difficult to obtain.

Filling in the blanks for some countries seems easy until I realize I have to choose. I have a favorite writer from New Zealand, Ngaio Marsh, who wrote mysteries, and I face a long list of choices for Ireland and England. Some of these slots I’ve left blank while I work my way through other parts of the globe. Right now I’m working on the Middle East.

So far I’ve avoided the big question. Why? Maybe it doesn’t matter. Maybe any reason to read beyond my familiar landscape is a good idea, but you must wonder if there is a good reason to do this beyond curiosity. Curiosity, interest in another culture, is always rewarded in my view, and by itself is a good enough reason.

Take a look at the list below, and if you have any suggestions please let me know. When I sit down with a new book by a woman living in a country I’ve never visited and living in a culture I can only imagine, I feel an excitement, an anticipation that is often lacking when I pick up other books. Perhaps you will too.

x UnreadCountryAuthorTitle
Afghanistan
Albania
AlgeriaAhlem MosteghanemiChaos of the Senses
Andorra
Angola
Antiguq and Barbuda
Argentina
Armenia
Australia
Austria
Azerbaijan
The Bahamas
Bahrain
Bangladesh
Barbados
Belarus
Belgium
Belize
Benin
Bhutan
Bolivia
Bosnia & HerzegovinaAsja BakicMars
Botswana
Brazil
Brunei
Bulgaria
Burkina Faso
Burundi
Cabo Verde
Cambodia
Cameroon
Canada
The Cayman Islands
Central African Republic
Chad
Chile
China
Colombia
Comoros
Congo, Dem. Rep. of
Congo, Rep. of
Costa Rica
Cote d'Ivoire
Croatia
Cuba
Cyprus
Czech Republic
Denmark
Djibouti
Dominica
Dominican RepublicJulia AlvarezIn the Time of the Butterflies
Ecuador
xEgyptYasmine El RashidiChronicle of a Last Summer: A Novel of Egypt
El Salvador
England
Equitorial Guinea
Eritrea
Estonia
Eswatini
Ethiopia
Germany
Fiji
Finland
France
Gabon
Gambia
Georgia
Germany
Ghana
Greece
Grenada
Guatemala
Guinea
Guinea-Bissau
Guyana
Haiti
Holy See
Honduras
Hungary
Iceland
IndiaNayantara SahgalMistaken Identity
Indonesia
IranRabeah GhaffariTo Keep the Sun Alive
Iraq
IrelandElizabeth BowenThe Last September
Israel
Italy
Jamaica
JapanRiku OndaThe Aosawa Murders
Jordan
Kazakhstan
Kenya
Serbia
Kiribati
Korea (north)
Korea (south)
Kosovo
KuwaitBothayna Al-EssaAll That I Want to Forget
Krygyzstan
Laos
Latvia
Lebanon
Lesotho
Liberia
Libya
Liechtenstein
Lithuania
Luxembourg
Mdagascar
Malawi
Malaysia
Maldives
Mali
Malta
Marshall Islands
Mauritania
Mauritius
Mexico
Micronesia
Moldova
Monaco
Mongolia
Montenegro
Morocco
Mozambique
Namibia
Nauru
Nepal
Netherlands
New ZealandNgaio MarshDeath and the Dancing Footman
Nicaragua
Niger
Nigeria
Norway
Oman
Pakistan
Palau
xPalestineSahar KhalifehWild Thorns
Panama
Papua New Guinea
Paraguay
Peru
Philippines
Poland
Portugal
Qatar
Republic of Korea
Romania
Russia
Rwanda
Saint Kitts and Nevis
Saint Lucia
Saint Vincent and the Grenadines
Samoa
SanMarino
SaoTome and Principe
Saudi ArabiaRajaa AlsaneaGirls of Riyadh
Scotland
Senegal
Serbia
Seychelles
Sierra Leone
Singapore
Slovakia
Solomon Islands
Somalia
South Africa
South Sudan
Spain
Sri Lanka
Sudan
Suriname
Sweden
Switzerland
Syria
Tajikistan
Tanzania
Thailand
Timor-Leste
Togo
Tonga
Trinidad and Tobago
Tunisia
xTurkeyElif ShafakThe Bastard of Istanbul
Turkmenistan
Tuvalu
Uganda
Ukraine
United States
Uruguay
Uzbekistan
Vanuatu
Venezuela
Vietnam
Wales
Yemen
Zambia
Zimbabwe