Wednesday, April 22, 2020

What's in an Ending?

After writing every day for three months I'm coming up to the final scenes in a new stand-alone. This is usually an exciting time for me because I have an idea of what will happen and I'm eager to see how all the elements play out. But as I approach this section I'm not as decided on the various threads as I usually am, which means I have far greater flexibility on the ending. So, how much choice do I have? What do I want in my ending?
In a cozy or traditional mystery, all the questions should be answered. Based on the form of comedy, the cozy mystery is expected to answer all questions, solve all problems, mete out punishment, and bring the community together again into a coherent whole. We want to see the villain get what he has coming to him or her. We want the virtuous sleuth to be rewarded with praise and new regard. That's exactly what happens in The Widows of Malabar Hillby Sujata Massey. The tidy ending is heartwarming and clear, much tidier than in real life. 
The second type of ending is a variation on the first. In this one the villain is caught, but another criminal in the midst of the community is revealed and departs. It doesn't matter how involved in the instigating crime this second party is; only that he or she walks away. This is the ending I chose in Friends and Enemies: A Mellingham Mystery.
The third type of ending is popular in a series that the reader especially likes. In this type the mystery is solved but then another mystery or problem occurs, and the sleuth doesn't have a moment to rest in glory. One crime is solved, and another is hinted at or committed, which means the sleuth can't walk away and move on. This is the ending chosen by Alexia Gordon in Murder in G Major.
In the fourth type the reader confronts a question of responsibility that transforms the mystery and its crime into a larger question, and no two readers may have the same response. In The Nine Tailorsby Dorothy L. Sayers, a man is found dead from what looks like a tortuous experience. Lord Peter Wimsey searches doggedly for a murderer to no avail. He stumbles on the answer quite by accident, but how the victim came to be where he was, unable to escape and thus unable to protect himself from death, raises questions of the nature of guilt, of responsibility and justice. No villain is arrested, no one is charged. Sayers addresses the underlying questions and offers one possible response.
There is a fifth type that few writers attempt, but it is delicious when tackled successfully. In this form, the crime may or may not be a murder but there is always deception around a death, perhaps a lesser crime, and a question of justice and responsibility. In The New Sonia Wayward(The Case of Sonia Wayward) by Michael Innes, a man goes sailing with his wife, a famous novelist who has been supporting him generously all their married life. When she falls overboard and drowns, he faces a bleak future. He decides to conceal her death, tell everyone she has gone on a trip, and write her romance novels himself. This has been called Innes's most cynical novel, though written with his light, wry touch.
The ending chosen tells us about the story structure, for example, but it also challenges the reader's view of justice and right or wrong. Not everyone will agree with Sayers's conclusion in The Nine Tailors, and not everyone will agree that community is restored in Murder in Mellingham, the first Mellingham mystery. Each ending is an interpretation of what justice means in a particular situation, and forces the reader to think about the choice that has been made. In a few more days I will have to choose one of the five possibilities, and right now I only know that it won't be the first one.


11 comments:

  1. Susan,

    I love your explanation of possible endings. I don't have any advice without reading the book itself. Excellent examples though.

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    1. Thanks, Jacquie. I had fun deciding which titles to use to illustrate each ending. And there are so many to choose from.

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  2. I admire cozy writers in keeping to the parameters of what a cozy, traditional novel demands. Sounds like you have excellent examples on which to base the outcome of your story. Good luck.

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    1. Thanks, Polly. The cozy ending is harder than it looks. Everything has to be explained.

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  4. Thanks, Susan, for such a great summary of possible endings (along with examples). I'll be happy to simply get to the ending with my current wip.

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    1. Thanks, Maris. I sympathize. Seeing the ending so close is such a relief, and now I "only" have to decide on which ending to use.

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  5. Great summation of cozy endings, Susan. I find myself really nervous (usually) when I get near the end of a novel. Since I don't plot, I have to pull everything together on the fly. Good luck finding your perfect ending.

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    1. Thanks, Jan. I completely understand your dilemma. At the beginning I thought I knew what the ending would be, but then as I progressed through the story, I came up with alternatives. And now, as the end is near, I'm even more undecided.

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  6. I agree with others that these are good summaries of endings. Confess that as a writer who uses the "discovery" method of finding my story, I'm hoping the ending will come to me, as I continue. Have a general idea, but have not worked out the specifics.

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    1. I too use the discovery process to find the ending, but I'm learning about how many avenues there are to the end. I'm still thinking about it and not sure where I'll end up.

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