In an interview P.D. James once described consulting an
accomplished climber on the details of scaling a particular cliff. She took
careful notes, wrote up her description of the ascent, and showed it to her
friend. He read it through carefully, nodding at each line, and then laughed
out loud at the end. When she asked him what was so funny, he replied, “You’ve
gotten all the details of the climb right but you let him make the climb in an
hour or so. It’s an eight-hour climb!” Details matter.
Whenever I begin a new story I establish in my own mind, and
often in my ongoing notes, the time of year, general weather considerations,
and any other details I’m going to rely on to tell the story. This can be more
complicated, or less so, depending on where the story is set.
When I’m writing about India, for example, I don’t worry
about the length of day because my setting, in Kerala, is so close to the
equator that the weather is hot or hotter, the sunrise and sunset are
consistent throughout the year. Further, each one happens quickly. South India
doesn’t have lingering, color exhilarating changes at twilight. South India
does have, however, deciduous trees, and I have to make sure I refer to them
dropping their leaves, for instance, at the appropriate time. For the most
recent Anita Ray mystery, When Krishna
Calls, all the trees mentioned are in full leaf if not in bloom.
When I’m writing about New England and other parts of the
world, I like to have a reference for the relevant time changes. Several
websites allow me to track sunrises, etc., for any part of the year. I use one
that allows me to printout a calendar for a particular month that includes
daily timings, such as sunrise, solar noon, moonrise, and length of day. I can
choose to include other information if I want. http://www.sunrisesunset.com/USA/
I also like to use a real sequence of days, in order to get
the weather right but also to avoid using the same kind of weather day in and
day out, unless it bears on the story. There are lots of weather sites that allow
a user to type in a zip code to get the weather for that location over a period
of days or longer. https://www.wunderground.com/history/
In Come About for
Murder and other Mellingham mysteries, the setting is sometimes established
by noting what is in bloom. I want to avoid using the same plants again and
again, so for this problem I consult one of the many online calendars for
planting. I prefer the site for the National Gardening Association, which
offers several useful pages of information. https://garden.org/apps/calendar/
Details matter in a mystery, and getting the setting right
is just as important as getting right the effects of a particular poison or details
of the uniform of a serviceman or woman.
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Hi Susan,
ReplyDeleteI agree completely--details do matter--whether writing mystery, romance, literary, etc. I think it's one of the strong points of your writing. For instance, when you write about India I feel as if I'm there. Appeals to the senses are so important in creating setting and atmosphere. Many small, exact details make a book or story come alive for readers.
I enjoy stories that are well grounded, and try to do the same in mine. Thanks for commenting, Jacquie.
DeleteThanks for listing these sites you use. I'm sure they'll be helpful to others in adding details.
ReplyDeleteI hope they're useful. Thanks for stopping by.
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