I recently came across a quote by Gore Vidal that caught my
attention and sparked my thinking about major and minor characters. Anyone who
writes a mystery series will develop a number of minor characters in order to
tell a fully fleshed-out story. I have several in the Anita Ray series, not all
of them recurring, but Vidal's comment made me take a second look at them.
The quote is taken from an interview with Vidal in Conversations with American Writers
edited by Charles Ruas.
"I heard somewhere the idea that every writer has a
given theatre in his head, a repertory company. Shakespeare has fifty
characters, I have ten, Tennessee [Williams] has five, [Ernest] Hemingway has
one, [Samuel] Beckett is busy trying to have none. You are stuck with your
repertory company and you can only put on plays with its characters."
(quoted in Authors Guild Bulletin,
Summer 2014, p. 34)
Normally I would keep reading after Vidal self-servingly
claims to have ten characters while other writers, Williams and Hemingway, have
far fewer. But his comment on Beckett, which made me laugh, was smarter than I
gave him credit for being, and his final comment was worth thinking about.
I don't know how many characters the average writer has. But
I do think all writers are in danger of repeating ourselves. If we have one
successful book, we are tempted to look for the magic in it, and try to capture
and repeat it, for future success. If we don't do that overtly, we may still begin
a second story and soon find ourselves repeating scenes that reveal patterns. This
is the territory of academics, who look for themes and underlying issues in a
writer's body of work.
Anyone who writes a series in any genre faces the problem of
avoiding repetition, and we work hard to make our characters and stories
original in each installment. It goes without saying that we develop a main
character that can carry a number of stories. We then surround our
series character with a family, of sorts, of supporting characters who have the
potential to grow and surprise us. We give each character a past or history,
clear physical description, and specific attitudes and quirks. We strive to
know them deeply, their emotional content, as well as their ordinary behavior.
In the Anita Ray series, Anita lives with her Auntie Meena
at Hotel Delite. The cast of characters includes Moonu, the main waiter, Ravi,
the desk clerk, and various other staff. Anita encounters murder among hotel
guests and at her relatives' homes. If Anita travels, she usually does so with
her Auntie Meena and Joseph, the hotel driver. This core cast was introduced in
the first Anita Ray mystery, Under the
Eye of Kali.
After characters, we turn our focus to creating unusual
situations to test the sleuth and explore other types of character. In the second Anita Ray mystery, The Wrath of Shiva, Anita
discovers the theft of ancient images from her extended family's estate. Smuggling of holy images in India is a special problem because of the sacredness and unique standing of these icons. We
learn more about Anita's physical courage in this story.
We may change setting, introduce problems among the "family" members, or put the sleuth in danger. But the goal has to continue to be to make the characters seem as real as possible. Whether we like them or not, the individual who crosses the stage must feel real to engage the reader.
We may change setting, introduce problems among the "family" members, or put the sleuth in danger. But the goal has to continue to be to make the characters seem as real as possible. Whether we like them or not, the individual who crosses the stage must feel real to engage the reader.
I don't know how many characters I have in my repertory, but
I work hard to develop minor characters so that they carry much of the story
and are themselves worth reading about. I want what happens to them to be
interesting and their circumstances compelling. In the third Anita Ray mystery,
For the Love of Parvati, Anita shares
part of center stage with Parvati, a maidservant with a secret and a fear. As
an undocumented worker from Sri Lanka, she has fled the now-ended civil war but
fears that others hold her to an old code of honor.
Anita travels easily through the layers of society that is modern India, from life with foreigners at her hotel to traditional homes and ways of life. In a short story, "The Secret of the Pulluvan Drum," Anita meets another young woman trying to
traverse the same boundary, between the traditional and the modern.
I don't think I could write a story without a character, in
imitation of Samuel Beckett, but if you're wondering how he does it, look at a
few of his shorter works. For a play without a character, I nominate Quad, one of my favorite Beckett
"performances,"available on youtube.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LPJBIvv13Bc
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LPJBIvv13Bc
The best part is that the characters take up residence in our minds and enrich our lives enormously!
ReplyDeleteWe do tend to live in fantasy worlds. Lucky us!
ReplyDeleteFascinating quotation by Vidal. Interesting blog. Now I'm going to think all day about how many characters live in my brain and probably won't get anything else done! Maybe my characters will get into a brawl and someone else will pop in and sort them all out. Oy. Confusing.
ReplyDeleteThe quote made me think about the "family" of characters I've created for each series. Maybe I need a catalyst such as the one you suggested. Hmm. Interesting idea.
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