On October 14, 2017, libraries around the country celebrated
Indie Author Day by sponsoring programs for independent authors. Libraries held
panels, readings, workshops, and group signings. During an Indie Author Day at
a community library, the librarian handed out a guide to different kinds of
editing.
As a former freelance editor and ghostwriter I was
interested in the way the guide described the levels of editing. Things have
changed a great deal since I was freelancing, but I question the divisions and
descriptions, largely because they don’t match up with what freelancers were
expected to do prior to POD and self-publishing. For my own peace of mind, I
want to describe the breakdown for the stages of book preparation.
Before self-publishing, writers who wanted to write and
publish went through traditional channels to reach an acquisitions editor. If
the manuscript was written but not finished, which was often the case with
nonfiction and less so with fiction, the editor might accept the ms
provisionally while the writer worked on substantive issues, or the ms was
handed off to an editor for developmental editing. The latter was often the
case with textbooks and with ms by people who were not writers but
professionals in their field.
Developmental editing for nonfiction involves fleshing out
ideas, working through and rounding out discussions, reorganizing and sometimes
adding material that is logically necessary to the text, and making sure the
arguments presented make sense for the whole. This is where ghostwriters come
in, and some earn a very good living finishing books for other people. In
fiction, the developmental editor might suggest adding a scene, combining
characters, increasing tension in certain scenes, or clarifying a subplot.
When the ms was completed, it might be passed along to a
fact checker. These are often librarians who can take the time to do the work
of checking facts in addition to their own duties. At a private library where I
often did research, some of the assistant librarians were regularly engaged in
a fact-checking job, and had to track down unusual or interesting details. The
publisher pays for this in important nonfiction work such as a biography by an
important historical figure by a well-known author.
After developmental editing, which the author must approve,
the editor managing the progress of the ms sends it along for copyediting. This is where a lot of confusion comes in. What exactly is copyediting? When I began freelancing for university presses as well as trade houses, copyediting was everything covered in the
Chicago Manual
of Style. If you have seen the reference book, you know exactly what that
means. Copyediting covers a lot. Yes, it covers spelling, punctuation, and
grammar, as well as the specific style chosen for the book (AP, MLA, a specific
university press style, or any other style).
In the simplest nonfiction ms, this means editing the
bibliography, the notes, and the text, in that order, and making sure all
relate appropriately. (Footnotes have a tendency to drift away from their
anchor, landing in the middle of a paragraph where they are confusing rather
than elucidating.)
Because of the technical aspects of university press
publications, editors must rely on experts in various fields, such as
mathematics or chemistry, to edit technical work. A good copyeditor in her
chosen field learns to recognize something that sounds off and will either
check it herself or call attention to it. If the author remarks that the
eruption of Mount Saint Helens in Washington State occurred almost exactly 100
years to the day after the explosion in Krakatoa, the copyeditor can easily
check that. (No, they are not so related. Krakatoa erupted in 1883, and the
other one in 1980.) But if she is unsure, she can tag it for the author. But
she cannot miss the correct styling of the names. Mount Saint Helens? No. The
correct form is Mount St. Helens. The editor must know how to style signs,
lakes, artwork, plays and poems, and anything else that appears in letters.
Proofreading is sometimes mixed in with copyediting, but
this is a different function tied to print, the version that is going to be
checked and then bound and sold to bookstores. The purpose of the proofreader is to make certain that
everything that was approved in the final copyedited ms appears in that form in
the proof copy. If it is not there, the proofreader marks it to be inserted. If
the author discovers an error that can be corrected without undue changes, she
notifies the editor. Writers are warned not to start rewriting the book at this
point. It’s done. Leave it alone.
Proofreaders are not perfect, as editors are not. The
easiest way to discover if errors have crept in and not been corrected is to
read the index (if there is one—a disappearing feature of books). Sometimes a
reader will find two versions of a proper name listed in the index because the
copyeditor failed to notice one of them was different, failed to query the
author, or the author failed to answer the query. By the time the index is
done, it’s too late. Some things you just have to live with.
These divisions are straightforward and logical. A writer
who wants more help with developing the story or theme remains in developmental
or substantive editing until she has a version she is happy with. Copyediting
is a final polish, a way to catch minor errors (and, one hopes, not big glaring
ones). The proofreader makes sure the entire ms is correctly transferred into
the form available to buyers.
Self-publishing and POD services have changed publishing
dramatically, but the process from first draft to final form should still
follow a logical path to ensure the final result is as near perfect as
possible. Yes, I’m a bit fussy about this. But the reader will appreciate the
writer’s and editor’s careful work.
To find more of my work, go to www.susanoleksiw.com
